The Azure Cloud Sect was a vertical hierarchy of arrogance. At the bottom were the Outer Peaks—the sprawling, chaotic masses where Lin Qingyu lived. Above them sat the Inner Peaks, reserved for those who had proven their utility. Higher still were the True Disciple Peaks, and at the summit were the six Elder Peaks, each a sovereign domain of power. Xue Lianhua, as a Personal Disciple of the Elder of the Frozen Peak, lived in a world of luxury that Shen Yuanxing could only visit through "Special Merit" passes.
But the "Chapter 20 Raid" didn't care about hierarchy. It was designed to decapitate the base of the mountain.
Lin Qingyu sat in the shade of a weeping willow, ostensibly watching a beetle crawl across a leaf. In reality, he was observing Deacon Ma. The Deacon was standing near the southern checkpoint, his face a mask of bureaucratic efficiency, but his fingers were twitching—a tell-tale sign of anxiety that Lin’s high EQ picked up instantly.
Ma is nervous, Lin thought. Shen’s 'unauthorized' relocation of those forty disciples has created a ripple. The 'Rot' is being noticed earlier than planned.
"Deacon Ma."
The voice was like a cold splash of water. Ma jumped, turning to see Shen Yuanxing standing there. The hero’s golden Qi was poorly suppressed, radiating a heat that made the nearby guards uncomfortable.
"Disciple Shen," Ma said, smoothing his robes. "Shouldn't you be at the Inner Training Grounds? The Sect Leader has given you special dispensation to use the Gravity Chambers."
"The air was too thin there," Shen said, his eyes drilling into Ma’s. "I felt like taking a walk. By the way, Deacon, I noticed some oddities in the southern warding stones. I mentioned it to a few of the Senior Brothers in the Hall of Justice. They said they’d send a team to inspect them tomorrow."
Ma’s face went momentarily pale. The "Hall of Justice" was a branch of the Inner Sect that didn't report to him. If they came, the Corrupted Marrow would be found.
"That... that is quite proactive of you, Disciple Shen," Ma stammered. "But there is no need to bother the Inner Sect with Outer Peak maintenance. I shall handle it personally tonight."
Shen Yuanxing nodded slowly, his hand resting on his sword hilt. He had done what Lin Qingyu’s "subtle hint" suggested—he had poked the nest. But as he walked away, his heart felt heavy. He could feel the eyes of the Deacon on his back, eyes filled with a murderous, dark intent.
Lin Qingyu watched the exchange from a distance. Shen is playing with fire, he thought. He thinks he’s being clever, but he’s just accelerating the timeline. If the traitors feel the walls closing in, they won't wait for the lunar alignment. They’ll strike early.
The "Traitors" were a complex bunch. In this world, the Righteous Sects like the Azure Cloud were often hypocrites—men who spoke of virtue while hoarding resources and stepping on the weak. The Demonic Sects were often just hot-headed outcasts who cultivated through brute force and emotion; they were "naive" in their own way, thinking that strength was the only truth.
But the Evil Sects... they were something else. They were the mindless extensions of the Final Villain, the ancient immortal soul that had fallen from the higher realms. They didn't want power or land; they wanted the total unraveling of the world's order to feed their master's shattered soul.
The Chapter 20 Raid was a joint venture: the Demonic Sects would provide the muscle, seeking to humiliate their "Righteous" rivals, while the Evil Sects pulled the strings from the shadows, ensuring the massacre was as bloody as possible.
Lin Qingyu sighed and stood up. He needed to be "useless" again.
He walked toward the southern gate, carrying a basket of laundry. As he passed Deacon Ma, he "tripped." It was a classic Lin Qingyu move—clumsy, undignified, and perfectly timed. A pair of oversized undergarments landed right on Ma’s boots.
"Oh! My apologies, Deacon!" Lin scrambled on the ground, looking terrified. "I’m so sorry! I’m such a klutz! I haven't been the same since I hit Level 4, my balance is all over the place!"
Ma looked down at the "trash" disciple. He saw the panicked eyes, the shaking hands, and the utter lack of dignity. This was the boy who had been spending time with the Ice Fairy? This was the "Stable Foundation" the Sect Master had whispered about?
Impossible, Ma thought, his suspicion dissipating. The boy is a fluke. A lucky coward. He couldn't possibly be the one leaking information to Shen Yuanxing.
"Get your filth off my shoes and get out of here, brat," Ma growled, kicking a stray sock away.
"Yes, sir! Right away, sir!" Lin gathered his laundry and scurried off, looking like a whipped dog.
[Emotional Stability System]
Condition Met: Successfully diverted a 'Traitor's Suspicion' through extreme self-humiliation.
Reward: Disguise Proficiency +1
System Note: That was painful to watch. Even I felt embarrassed for you. But, Deacon Ma now considers you a non-threat.
Mental Stability: 100% (You have no shame).
Shame doesn't pay the bills, Lin thought as he reached the safety of the Library gardens.
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He found Mu Ruxin and Xue Lianhua sitting by the jasmine bushes. Xue Lianhua, despite being a Personal Disciple of an Elder Peak, was spending more time in the Outer Peak than was strictly allowed. She was currently showing Mu Ruxin a basic ice-condensing technique to keep the tea cold.
"Lin Qingyu," Xue said, her voice softer than it had been a week ago. "You look... disheveled."
"Laundry accident," Lin said, sitting down cross-legged. "The rocks are very aggressive today."
Mu Ruxin handed him a cup of cold tea. "You’re always having accidents, Qingyu. But you always come out of them without a scratch."
"That’s my talent," Lin said, sipping the tea.
He looked at Xue Lianhua. She was the "Original Female Lead." In the original novel, she was a goddess on a pedestal, untouchable and cold. Here, she was a girl worried about her Master's temper and enjoying a quiet afternoon with a librarian.
"Senior Sister Xue," Lin said, his voice dropping its joking tone. "If you had to leave the sect suddenly... let’s say, for a 'training mission'... what would you take with you?"
Xue Lianhua blinked. "My sword. My jade pendant. Why?"
"Take a few of those ice-talismans too," Lin suggested. "And maybe a map of the southern forest's hidden caves. I hear the air there is very... restorative... during times of high stress."
Xue stared at him. She was starting to recognize his "hints." They weren't warnings of doom; they were practical suggestions for a retreat.
"You think something is coming," she stated.
"I think the weather is changing," Lin replied. "And when it rains, it’s better to have an umbrella than a sword."
The sun set, and the atmosphere in the Outer Peak shifted from tense to predatory.
Deep in his hut, Lin Qingyu closed his eyes. He didn't meditate. He simply listened.
He knew why he had to let the raid happen. In the original novel, Shen Yuanxing would fight a Demonic Elite—a man named Iron-Blood—and be utterly defeated. It was this defeat that shattered Shen's arrogance and forced him to seek the "Dragon-Soul" sword later in the story. If Lin stopped the raid, Shen would remain a "big fish in a small pond," and when he eventually met the Final Villain in Chapter 160 (or the "True Novel" equivalent), he would be crushed like an ant.
The Hero needs his scars, Lin thought. And the sect needs to lose its fat.
The Outer Peaks were filled with corrupt deacons and lazy disciples who lived off the reputation of the Elders. The raid would burn the rot away.
Suddenly, a massive BOOM echoed from the southern perimeter.
The earth shook. The silence of the night was replaced by a high-pitched, screaming whistle—the sound of the southern warding stones shattering.
Lin Qingyu didn't jump. He reached for his "High-Grade Earplugs" and tucked them into his ears.
[World Event: The Breach of the Azure Cloud]
Status: Ongoing.
Narrative Tension: 45% (Critical)
System Note: The 'Chapter 20' event has triggered on Chapter 12. The butterfly effect is in full swing.
Outside, the sky turned a bruised purple. Pillars of flame erupted from the Southern Gates.
"FOR THE TRUE PATH!" a thousand voices roared.
Demonic cultivators, riding shadow-beasts, flooded through the gap in the walls. Behind them, silent and terrifying, were the cloaked figures of the Evil Sects, their eyes glowing with a sickly green light.
Lin Qingyu looked out his small window. He saw disciples running in panic. He saw the first of the dormitories go up in flames.
But he also saw something else.
In the center of the chaos, a pillar of golden light erupted. Shen Yuanxing had taken the field. The hero was screaming, his sword cleaving through shadow-beasts with a desperate ferocity. Because of Lin’s hint, Shen was positioned near the barracks. He was already holding the line, saving dozens of disciples who should have died in the first ten minutes.
Go on, hero, Lin thought. Do your thing.
Lin Qingyu turned toward the back of his hut. He didn't go toward the fight. He moved toward the Library.
He ran through the smoke, his Level 4 stability making his movements fluid and efficient. He wasn't the fastest, but he didn't trip over the debris. He moved like a ghost through the burning streets.
He reached the Library doors just as a group of Demonic cultivators were preparing to bash them in.
"Look at this one!" one of the demons laughed, raising a jagged axe. "A little grey-robed rat! Leave his head for the master!"
Lin Qingyu didn't stop. He didn't draw a sword.
He reached into his sleeve and pulled out a handful of "Blinding Dust"—a mixture of crushed spirit-pepper and flash-powder he’d been making for weeks.
Poof!
The demons screamed, clutching their eyes. Lin Qingyu didn't stay to fight them. He slipped through the library doors and barred them behind him.
Inside, the air was still cool. Mu Ruxin was there, holding a defensive scroll, her face pale. Beside her stood Xue Lianhua, her sword unsheathed, her eyes filled with a terrifying, frozen resolve.
"You're late," Mu Ruxin whispered, her voice trembling.
"The traffic was terrible," Lin replied, breathing heavily. He looked at Xue Lianhua. "Senior Sister, don't go out there yet. The 'Big Fish' hasn't arrived. If you go out now, you'll just waste your Qi on the small fry."
"Shen is out there," Xue said, her knuckles white.
"Shen is a dragon," Lin said. "Let him burn. We stay here. This is the foundation."
He sat down on the floor, leaning against a bookshelf. He looked like a man who was just waiting for a storm to pass, rather than a man in the middle of a sect-wide slaughter.
High above the Outer Peak, on the Elder Peaks, the powerhouses of the sect were finally waking up. They saw the fires. They felt the breach.
"The Southern Gate?" the Sect Master roared, standing on his balcony. "How? The warding stones were supposed to be indestructible!"
"Treachery, my Lord," a voice whispered from the shadows.
The Elders began to descend, but they were met mid-air by the leaders of the Demonic Sects. The "Sky Battle" had begun.
But on the ground, the tragedy was already unfolding.
Shen Yuanxing was currently facing a man twice his size, draped in armor made of human bone. This was Iron-Blood, the elite demonic cultivator.
"So, you're the genius?" Iron-Blood laughed, his axe dripping with the blood of Outer Disciples. "Let's see if your gold turns to lead when I break your spine!"
The two clashed, and for the first time in the story, the hero’s golden light was suppressed. Shen was pushed back, his sword trembling, his eyes widening in realization.
He was Level 5. His opponent was a Peak-Core Formation master.
It wasn't a fight. It was a lesson.
Inside the Library, Lin Qingyu felt the vibration of the impact. He looked at the System screen.
[Narrative Check:]
Hero Status: Losing. (As intended)
Female Leads: Safe.
Outer Peak Casualties: Reduced by 15% due to User intervention.
System Evaluation: You are successfully managing a massacre. Your heart rate is 65 bpm.
"Is it always going to be like this?" Mu Ruxin asked, sitting down beside Lin. She could hear the screams outside, the sound of the world she knew being torn apart.
Lin Qingyu reached out and took her hand. It was cold and shaking.
"No," Lin said softly. "The world is just resetting, Ruxin. It hurts to watch, but when it’s over... we’ll build a better garden."
He didn't mention the Final Villain. He didn't mention the years of war ahead. He just sat in the dark, an "ordinary" disciple holding the hand of a friend, while the hero out there learned how to bleed.
The Chapter 20 Raid—triggered on Chapter 12—was the end of the beginning.
And Lin Qingyu, the man who knew everything, was the only one who wasn't surprised.

