We're nearing the end, so reactions would be appreciated. As always, as an author I'm an S but when I need feedback, consider me an M and use the sharp end of your words.

  Two three questions:

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1. Did you mind that I used the 3d voice to world build? You know, the part where I I casually explained what was happening in the world regarding the nations?


  
2. Was it funny at the end, when Nealon just yells hi when the tension is high (I hope)? I’m not sure if it had the effect I wanted it to have. If not, then I might wanna remove it and keep the tension up.


  
3. Any other reactions? Are you as excited as I am now, or is this the cold night of my college campus that's making me shake?