Reflections ----->
Olliver sudden character and personality change
Many people have been confused about this because I introduced him as a cheerful guy who ends up being the quiet kid. This was sort of a mistake on my behalf because I was on a writing spree and did not stop to notice the character change I had caused.
But I will make amends by adding some backstory and probably a side quest based on Oliver to fix it.
NOT MUCH MENTION OF CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT IN CLASSES.
- SO THIS ONE IS SOMETHING I INTEND TO CHANGE SOON, AND IT IS IN CAPITAL LETTERS CAUSE I REGRET THIS.
no mention at all of the demon attack after midterms
- this demon attack was supposed to be a foreshadowing buuuuut I'm dumb and I don't know how to do that so I'm planning on doing something about it
I was unable to show the growth of each character after the chapter ' The Last Stand', and I will change it.
All the ideas/stories/arcs that are finished/ somewhat finished in this fiction -
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1. Lance getting magic
2. Lance going on a problematic quest with his team
3. selecting first-year courses and going to classes
4. meeting Lance's future besties ( Olliver , kade , Lyra, Nico, Bella , Felix )
all the ideas/stories/arcs that are ongoing in this fiction -
1. getting some combat-oriented spells.
2. Getting Lance to figure out his feather problem.
3. Lance's job
4. WILLIAM
all the ideas/stories/arcs that I'm planning for in this fiction -
1) FORESHADOWING
2) INTRODUCING LANCETOO NOBILITY, AND POLITICS
3) SPOILER AHEAD -
WILLIAM'S SHADY PAST
* THE SPOILER FEATURE IS COOL, MAN*
----------SO I've DECIDED TO ADD SOME SPOILER BLOCKS LATER ON IN AUTHOR NOTES, these will contain lists of Lance's spell repertoire or short summaries of what the current arc is.
THE FOLLOWING IS A LIST OF EVERY SPELL LANCE KNOWS TILL NOW -
- lesser gust
- galeburst
- tremor disrupt
-lesser forcefield
ok great , let me know what you think
