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Chapter 4:Thank you,Mithrah

  What the..."Is that what I am thinking?"

  ..."A blue-"

  "Nice...So what do you do and why are you a blue screen?"I say showing my annoyance.

  "So you got the idea from games I played?"It was taking form of a blue screen to communicate with me.Like how the MMO interface would in the old world.

  "So why are all of my skills sealed?"Almost all my skills were sealed.

  "I see..."Then I looked at the pitch black dimension"Then do tell me now where am I?"

  "So then why am I here?"he could simply talk to me when I was awake.

  "I see.Then show me my appearance.I do not even know what I look like yet!"Mirrors in my soul palace was not really mirrors.Mirrors would show external appearance.I could only see my past appearance from them.A man with black hair and eyes with olive skin.Wearing black clothes from head to toe.My very look screamed average.I do not know if it was my average,uninteresting looks or my thin presence but within ten minutes,you could forget that I existed.

  He said and made a clone of me.But man,was that really me?My skin was pale,not really a sickly pale.Like skin of a vampire,that has never seen sun.I had long black hair and a chubby face.I was really cute.But most interesting aspect of my look was my eyes.They were golden and even seemed to sparkle like gold.I do not know why but they felt otherworldly.

  "Now let start from status screen first!Status screen"

  "WHAT THE HELL?!"You gotta be shitting me!"I am 12389 years old?!"

  "I am 12389 years old...I have already became an old guy...No wait!I am not an old guy!I am ancient!...I did not even spend a month in this world.HOW RIDICULOUS!"

  This probably means I will outlive everyone I will ever meet...Depressing!Lets think about that later!"Blue Screen!Explain my stats to me!"

  "Muahwhahahahah!I am a cheat character!"

  "9x more stats!That is not over powered?"How is that not overpowered?

  "So how do I advance?Do I go out and kill cute critters or something?"

  "I see.Then I will investigate my abilities now."I was excited about my skills.

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  "I see Blue Screen.So you made Amargyr for me?"I was shocked.He solved all my problems!

  I saw everything I needed to see.I do not think I have to stay here any further."I am leaving."

  "What is it?"I ask.

  <3RD PERSON POV>

  Scene shifts from black background to that of a vibrant forest.An escape pod is falling down.An average man with black hair and eyes runs through the forest with unbelievable speed.In the escape pod there was a beautiful woman.She had a delicate face with two scars in her cheek.It was certain that she was a warrior.She had blue eyes and fair skin.Short blonde hair."I must leave.She is a human." he looked hesitant,but took her home with him anyway."Aryas eirch revarimlas."he touched her face.

  Scene shifted again.A man living with a woman inside a wooden house.Woman looks different now.Her long hair is a ponytail.She has cute clothes.They are eating as together as woman looks on him smilingly.Man is frowning.Then comes night time.After telling the man to not stay up late,she goes to her bedroom upstairs.Man is moving to his own bedroom downstairs."So I could not love her after all.Seeing she does not really lack in beauty,"he says frowning"I simply wanted to try.It failed.How can one love a doll?But I am not capable of trust."

  Scene shifted once more.This time man is frowning again.While woman is horrified of him.In her eyes there is only reflection of a monster."YOU MONSTER!"she screams running away.Man looks after her a melancholic expression on his face."She is right.I am a monster.I don't blame her.I just thought that maybe...But I was wrong after all.For my goals I do not need myself.I must throw me away."he says,resolution in his face.

  Scene shifts now man is standing in a pure white dimension.An old man who was called keeper of the dead looks at him and tells him that he is dead.He thinks back,she was the one who killed me surely.But the old man tells him he was struck by a meteor.Although suspicious since not remembering anything at all,he doesn't care.

  He did not want to live as Seeker anymore.He is going to hell.As he was taught by Old Father Xalus,he probably is going to deepest circle of hell.At least he can suffer a punishment for what he has done.Not that he feels guilt after all.

  Workers and soldiers scurry,trying to feed the desires of their ever-changing masters.Not enjoying one day of their work.Empty eyes,empty faces,empty lives.Even their masters are not really happy.Always suffering,hurting.Death should be a mercy.They themselves profit from their passing.

  Man tells him he is going to hell.Tell him his regret...After thinking.He decides to become the hero he read in novels.He tells him his only regret is not using his son.Man looks at him with pity.He wonders if the man understood?

  

  "Why did you show me that?"I feel my face frowning and my eyes squinted.I did not want to remember!

  I do not know what to say.So that was the reason why Ashar was sorry.My dream...It seems I chose wrong path to it.Blue screen was right.Emotionally I never progressed beyond a teenager.My new emotions?They only made me uncomfortable.I was like a child scared of the dark.Unable to see I simply stayed where I was and role played a hero.

  I cannot make it like everything did not happen.If I close my eyes it won't go away.I have finally found my answer.I know what to do.I feel at peace now"I remembered me.Thank you,Mithrah."Now I had a companion.For the first time in my life,I am not alone.

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  With this at last prologue is done...Man it took me five chapters.When I decided to write the story in first person point of view,I wanted to make a twist where character lied!He lied about his thoughts and himself.I hope you forgive me!

  Emotionally never progressed beyond a young boy.After experiencing emotions again and being in a place trapped alone for 1000 years...You can understand why he is almost insane.Because he imitated the hero he read about he seemed classic stereotype.But not everything he told is lies.

  I am writing this to get an experience of writing...Because I wanted to try a twist like this,everything else suffered.I hope I can improve it later on.I bit off more than I could chew!After this well,I am going to get the story on track and write a more heartwarming chapters.

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