Alright. So I've been looking through the story, and while I'm happy with most of it, there are a few things that I'm not happy with, so I'm going too just go and change them. Like I've said before, I'm mainly making this for me to have a story I enjoy writing.

  I do not intend to change any of the major plot points. I'm really just going to make changes that allow me to have more focus on the story. As such, here is a list of the changes I'll be making as well as the reason I'll be changing it.

  1. I'm going to change it so that dungeon cores can trade monster designs. The way I envision it working is that dungeon cores can create core blueprints that allow another dungeon core to learn how to make the monster in question. Once the blueprint is created, the dungeon core that made it will then have to recreate the design to be able to make it again.

  The reason I want to do this is because it will allow Null to start using the abilities he has as a dungeon. It also gives him more of a reason to be using the dungeon guild more, as I could then put an incentive structure in place where he can obtain more core blueprints through the dungeon guild. I also wouldn't have to change many things to implement this. Just change some dialog around.

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  2. That brings me to the next change. Dialouge. I won't be changing the overall conversations. I'll just be trying to go through and make them feel more natural.

  3. Complete rework of the memorial scene. I really don't like the way it worked out. The whole thing with Demons creating zombies and stuff will still be there, but I plan to change it for the memorial service to be a more private one by the members of the special production team and other characters for SDCOUD. I feel like it makes more sense in the context of the story for everyone to hold more private memorial services than the one big one, and I can include the commanders speech as something that occurs on a channel on the fortress that everyone can tune into and view on a monitor.

  At any rate, that's a list of all the major changes I plan to make. There might be a few other minor tweaks I'll make here or there, but overall, the story should remain mostly the same aside from that.

  I think it will probably be about a week or so for me to go through and make all the changes. In the meantime, I will be going and making more chapters, but I plan to release them once all the edits are done. So look forward to several chapters being released at once when all the editing is done.

  Also, as a side note, once all the editing is completed, I will be deleting this notice. If you all have any suggestions for stuff you want to see changed, feel free to put them in the comments. I'm happy to hear from you all. Hope you're enjoying the story so far.