For those that read the whole thing. Thank you it means a lot but Im discontinuing this novel.

  my plans are to do a soft reboot of the story with all the main plot points still there such as the red age and how it caused the curses that are plaguing this world.

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  this was my first attempt at writing and re-reading it all made me realize how rushed certain parts are how little certain things I wanted to emphasize (Marlin’s mentally broken and exhausted life having basically no impact.) and more such things.