This time I'm here to give you a small progress report (
The changes I've made are significant; they are not minor enough to go unnoticed, but the main events remain more or less the same. I've also rearranged the importance of the secondary characters quite a bit, giving some more dialogues than before and others less. Some characters appear earlier, and others don't appear at all. I don't want to speak too soon, but I think this time I've done a good job, with enough details that will make it much more enjoyable for those who re-read it and for those who keep up with the novel, but also keeping it manageable for new people as well, I hope.
Aside from that, regarding the title of the novel, I was thinking that at least for the first few days while I transfer the chapters and continue changing the older ones, I will use the title "The Legend of Atlantis and the Fox Girl" and then change it back to "Valkyria Squadron" when I'm finished. This way, I can try to get new and hopefully "original" reviews, and once I gain new momentum, regular readers will still be able to find it afterwards.
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I still don't have a possible release date, but at the pace I'm going, I'll probably finish reworking the Oriente 6 Arc in one or two weeks, plus a couple of days for the novel to be approved by a moderator. What is clear is that I will definitely let you know as soon as possible so that you can go and review it yourselves.
Finally, I still need to decide on the cover, and I think I will need your help for that. I want to choose one that will catch the readers' attention. I have an idea of what might work on this site, but I still want to see your opinion on which image should be the cover.
First, we have Tamamo 1:
Or Tamamo 2:
It could also be The True Dragon of War(Although I may not be allowed to use it because of the blood):
Or simply the twins:
Maybe Momo could work, although it is risky:
Or the Momo version with a nun/maid costume:
I think that would be all for now, once again I would like to know what you think in the comments.
Which image do you think should be used as the cover?