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In the country of Sanaka, a new chapter of history has been recorded. Tharos Online.The very first full immersion VR to hit the markets, Tharos Online overturned every expectation the public had of it. It was a major hit, with every person wanting to get a chance to play it.Kim Woojin is one such kid. As an avid fan of gaming, he worked hard in order to fulfill his deal with his parents. Follow Woojin''''s adventures in Tharos Online, as he struggles to play the game, being a complete VR newbie.This is just sort of a trial fic. I want to get used to the VR genre, so I''''d love it if I could get some reviews on how to improve on the story, and the game. I intend to make a story with a more unique story, so please give me your opinions on this! (Not the story, the VR element. The story is a cover for World domination~! ) Cough cough. Statistics Overall Score .star-7861-overall-79ab0e2ac4ed41ffa48229afb38c59cd:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 7,493 Average Views : 1,070 Followers : 11 Favorites : 1 Ratings : 0 Pages : 72 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author The Immortal Cockroach Wolf