root-book

First of all my first language is not English, so please don´t be offended if you find mistakes. I would appreciate it if you could point my mistakes out so that my English gets better._________________________________________________________________________________Once there was a old and ancient dungeon. That dungeon existed longer than all history records of the country it is located in. The dungeon helped the kingdom a lot, it turned the kingdom from a lowly and small sized one into one of the strongest and largest kingdoms ever seen.But sadly the Kingdom turned itself against this dungeon, as the dungeon didn´t want to help to unite the whole continent. So with the help of three other kingdoms and their respective dungeons, they attacked this mighty and ancient dungeon. Who thought that through my death, my enemies granted me the chance to evolve from a Dungeon Core to a Dungeon God. This was the last thought of the dungeon before it´s conscience faded into the darknessSince the destruction of this ascended dungeon over two-hundred years passed. The mightiness of this dungeon is long forgotten. Nobody remembers it so, now is the time for it to awaken ……as a god. Statistics Overall Score .star-7908-overall-50e5aedfa2e14b02b8fcd5681c243ecc:after{ width: 78.266% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 53,139 Average Views : 4,428 Followers : 187 Favorites : 39 Ratings : 10 Pages : 58 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author