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Abel Hall an orphan born on the upper hemisphere of atreia, found by Alex Hall a cultivator that rised from the lower hemisphere and raised Abel like his own son, during Abel six birthday he went with his faction to a mission but were ambushed by their competitors that joined with demoninc beingsin the end, he misteriously dissapeared, nobody knows his wherebouts.Abel decides to train to go get revenge and look for his father, without realizing the many people that will stand on his way, he will be loved by some hated by others. most of time hated beacuse his apperance will make him too popular with the female gender.These is my first Novel please try to be nice, First time i try to write something, critisim is allowed, if i make a mistake i ask to please correct me , but please not insult me english is not my native lenguage i try to do my best XD.A novel tht i came out after using as reference Magical Tournament: Rise Of The Black Swan and using doulou dalu and ATG as reference :P please comment and help me get better. contructive arguments always welcomed. Statistics Overall Score .star-5366-overall-09fd5f8a1b6e4b9485e1c9c6d5401c04:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 5,554 Average Views : 1,111 Followers : 11 Favorites : 2 Ratings : 0 Pages : 14 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author