root-book

The second VRMMORPG will be launched, Everyone is waiting for it. After asking his best friend to play it with him, Arlon Kain was rejected. What will happen to our pessimist high school boy Main Character?----------------------------------------------------------------It was my first time writing something like this. sorry if my english were bad.If there is something that need to be fixed please tell me. you could give the detail of grammar and spelling mistakes in first chapter, well other chapter is fine too. Statistics Overall Score .star-2664-overall-93e5946e4ceb42f0a4954c5940dac22f:after{ width: 66.9034% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 21,012 Average Views : 1,751 Followers : 42 Favorites : 5 Ratings : 3 Pages : 54 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author